Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

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Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by Spino77 on Thu Oct 20, 2011 6:37 am

heres some skins that arent that great and real old (they were both made before my series Prehistoric)
First ones an fantasy "Eastern" species of Acrocanthosaurus that was going to be used in the first episode of Prehistoric but was replaced with the Deinonychus plot.



Acro Link

And heres the Primeval Spinosaurus featured in Prehistoric:


Spino Link

enjoy! and do your job Gorsh

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Zomg a critique D:

Post by MrGorsh on Thu Oct 20, 2011 7:39 am

First, Spinosaurus. There are very few referrences for Primeval spinosaurus which means it would be a pain in the arse. But of what I see on the skin, the texture on the lower parts of hind legs and whole arms (maybe the neck too ) is very scaly and layed at the strange angle, which gives this spinosaurus not very nice impression when you see into the details, zooming in closely. The body part is layed nicely, so is the sail and the tail. I can see that you have put some effort to make the head look realistic and laid the texture carefully, unfortunately nostrils stick to the very top of the head so it looks like a mix with a whale. There are not many joint issues, the most threatening are the ones on the neck and lower leg patches.
Overall, it's a nice skin and good option for Primeval series fans, but I have some doubts if everyone would use it continously, as there are some annoying little errors injuring the skin.

Second, Acrocanthosaurus. I know this texture and I remember how tricky it can be sometimes to be laid nicely. You did a good job laying it around the dinosaur, it looks naturally and lacks major joint issues - maybe except the upper front part of the thigh. First error is the neck texture. The 'bumps' on source were much smaller on the neck, also you have the scales laid horizontaly, while they should be angled a bit upwards. I can see no ear on the backside of the head. You should also try making new transparency around the Acrocanthosaurus' spine ridge, as with the bumps you have there and the serrations you applied, it looks somehow unnatural and weird.
The skin itself is nicely laid, you should put more work around the neck and head to make it more reallistic. It's also a good option to experiment with new shapes of the transparent parts of the ridge if you want to apply a texture like this.

Final rating from me:
Spinosaurus recieves three stars, you could have done better but it's still usable.

Acrocanthosaurus recieves three and half stars, it's good, but there are some minor errors damaging the final effect.

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by Spino77 on Thu Oct 20, 2011 8:14 am

MrGorsh wrote:First, Spinosaurus. There are very few referrences for Primeval spinosaurus which means it would be a pain in the arse. But of what I see on the skin, the texture on the lower parts of hind legs and whole arms (maybe the neck too ) is very scaly and layed at the strange angle, which gives this spinosaurus not very nice impression when you see into the details, zooming in closely. The body part is layed nicely, so is the sail and the tail. I can see that you have put some effort to make the head look realistic and laid the texture carefully, unfortunately nostrils stick to the very top of the head so it looks like a mix with a whale. There are not many joint issues, the most threatening are the ones on the neck and lower leg patches.
Overall, it's a nice skin and good option for Primeval series fans, but I have some doubts if everyone would use it continously, as there are some annoying little errors injuring the skin.

Second, Acrocanthosaurus. I know this texture and I remember how tricky it can be sometimes to be laid nicely. You did a good job laying it around the dinosaur, it looks naturally and lacks major joint issues - maybe except the upper front part of the thigh. First error is the neck texture. The 'bumps' on source were much smaller on the neck, also you have the scales laid horizontaly, while they should be angled a bit upwards. I can see no ear on the backside of the head. You should also try making new transparency around the Acrocanthosaurus' spine ridge, as with the bumps you have there and the serrations you applied, it looks somehow unnatural and weird.
The skin itself is nicely laid, you should put more work around the neck and head to make it more reallistic. It's also a good option to experiment with new shapes of the transparent parts of the ridge if you want to apply a texture like this.

Final rating from me:
Spinosaurus recieves three stars, you could have done better but it's still usable.

Acrocanthosaurus recieves three and half stars, it's good, but there are some minor errors damaging the final effect.

Fair nuff, Ive improved from those I think though. Would you agree?

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by MrGorsh on Thu Oct 20, 2011 8:15 am

Yes, considering when they were made, you have made some serious progress Razz

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by Spino77 on Thu Oct 20, 2011 8:21 am

MrGorsh wrote:Yes, considering when they were made, you have made some serious progress Razz
haha cheers man Smile

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by RessurectedSpinosaur on Thu Oct 20, 2011 5:33 pm

spino77 wrote:heres some skins that arent that great and real old (they were both made before my series Prehistoric)
First ones an fantasy "Eastern" species of Acrocanthosaurus that was going to be used in the first episode of Prehistoric but was replaced with the Deinonychus plot.



Acro Link

And heres the Primeval Spinosaurus featured in Prehistoric:


Spino Link

enjoy! and do your job Gorsh

these skins are awesome spino77 cheers !! your prehistoric series is cool too

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by peios on Thu Oct 20, 2011 5:42 pm

very good

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by Spinosaurus marocannus on Thu Oct 20, 2011 5:45 pm

the primeval spinosaur is very good

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by Tyrannodude123 on Thu Oct 20, 2011 8:16 pm

I REALLY like the Acro! very fine details & textures! Very Happy

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by Daxinator on Thu Oct 20, 2011 8:29 pm

peios wrote:very good
No one or two word post! Read the rules!

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by Carnosaurus on Thu Oct 20, 2011 9:56 pm

Man, that Acro is incredible, as I'm seriously going to download that Smile and I've seen a Primeval Spino before, or did you make that one?

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by Spino77 on Fri Oct 21, 2011 7:38 am

Carnosaurus wrote:Man, that Acro is incredible, as I'm seriously going to download that Smile and I've seen a Primeval Spino before, or did you make that one?
Its mine of course xD look at the sail, its shaped differently to RSRs one. And thanks guys for the great comments Big Grin

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by aristo on Fri Oct 21, 2011 7:48 am

How do you make effects at the Acro feet S77

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by Spino77 on Fri Oct 21, 2011 9:07 am

aristo wrote:How do you make effects at the Acro feet S77
the what sorry?

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by velociraptor24 on Fri Oct 21, 2011 7:20 pm

charchara looks like acro.

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by Spino77 on Sat Oct 22, 2011 12:27 am

velociraptor24 wrote:charchara looks like acro.
Rhats cause I used MR Acrocanthosaurus textures on the Prehistoric Charchardontosaurus

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by aristo on Sat Oct 22, 2011 6:13 am

spino77 wrote:
aristo wrote:How do you make effects at the Acro feet S77
the what sorry?
I mean how to make colour like light at Acro feet? Did you use dodge tools

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Re: Unreleased skins: Primeval Spinosaurus and "Eastern" Acrocanthosaurus

Post by Spino77 on Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:49 am

aristo wrote:
spino77 wrote:
aristo wrote:How do you make effects at the Acro feet S77
the what sorry?
I mean how to make colour like light at Acro feet? Did you use dodge tools
I just copied the texture on the feet on the picture to mine

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