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realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by jplm on Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:10 pm

V1

another skin,made from boredom.this time,its velociraptor,which I tried to make as realistic as posible(please be soft when critizising about the joints,because in order tho make them invisible,I'd have to make each and every feather go in the exact place that it should).pics: http://imageshack.us/g/560/simjp2011120518593451.png/
.tml download:http://www.mediafire.com/?cxoyj1r2yr1c1fp
.dds download:http://www.mediafire.com/?8t0k0tbbo6ao12i

as usuall,credits to draganzer for posting the ref pic
everybody here is allowed to use this skin in their own work,series,etc,or post it in other websites(which I would like someone to do with all my skins),but MUST post here to tell me or PM me
please coment

V2

the v2 is done.this time,I focused on fixing what Gorsh told me.pics:
http://imageshack.us/g/189/simjp2011120717095009.png/
.tml download:http://www.mediafire.com/?juzzlrgr6h1uyzv
.dds download:http://www.mediafire.com/?p7ci9ahbko14wgd


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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by repodreptiles on Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:46 pm

great job my friend 5 from me Very Happy
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by Optiraptor on Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:47 pm

thats a cool skin.
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by jplm on Mon Dec 05, 2011 11:40 pm

wow thanks,I think its good,but not the best
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by aristo on Tue Dec 06, 2011 4:58 am

Can you give me direct image?
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by Spino77 on Tue Dec 06, 2011 4:58 am

I cant see the pic :/
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm

Post by jpog rocks on Tue Dec 06, 2011 6:32 am

Lovely feather texture !!!!
But the teeth look as if some ankylosaur had hit him in the face !
Still 5/5 as i have given a vote .
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by Spino77 on Tue Dec 06, 2011 6:53 am

ahh now I see it. Very good, your skins are getting better Smile 3/5 from me.
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by jplm on Tue Dec 06, 2011 1:04 pm

thanks for all the comments.this one was hard because of th feathers.about the pics,I can only put links cause they simply don't show,and about the teeth,those are the default reaptor's
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by salem on Tue Dec 06, 2011 2:04 pm

WoW



really realistic and cool skin

4/5 for me

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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by Gigasaurus on Wed Dec 07, 2011 3:07 am

Wow a very realistic raptor skin! Keep up the good works.

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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by MrGorsh on Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:43 am

Feathers on joints aside, joint coloration does not match at the surrounding texture making your joint moved from actual joint to the solid model part. I don't like blurry texture on the tail that has a feeling of being smudged. Same and even worse is on the inner part of hind leg - fortunately people usually watch the outer parts of dinosaur. Last but not least - body. You have legs and arms "pasted" on the body. That's an error. There should be belly texture, not legs. Try to find nice underpart body textures and place in that spots instead of sourcetexturing leg texture on the body, it barely works.

Not a bad skin, but you could have done much better here. Skin itself looks inventive but the outcome is not as much appealing as expected. It's still a good choice if someone wants feathered raptor.

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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by jplm on Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:14 pm

I'll try to fix this in the v2.thanks for telling me what was wrong.anyway,I'm happy with the result,I'm just a newbie in skinning


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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by MrGorsh on Wed Dec 07, 2011 6:34 pm

Everyone is newbie at some point. Not everyone was given exact tips what one's doing wrong. I'm sure v2 will be much better Wink
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by jplm on Wed Dec 07, 2011 7:23 pm

I ave one question only,what can I do with the inner parts of the body,from where i can't get any texture at all
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by MrGorsh on Wed Dec 07, 2011 7:41 pm

I suggest trying to either multiply the parts from around of it. Or putting textures from two-three pictures on one skin
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by jplm on Wed Dec 07, 2011 7:43 pm

I could only get one pic,so I'll try the multiply
EDIT:v2 is done,I tried to fix everything you told me about,but focused in the joints
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by Tamara Henson on Wed Dec 07, 2011 9:19 pm

This is the best feathered raptor I have seen so far. Only a few joint/texture issues so I give it a 4.5. I haven't tried it in-game yet (I have noticed that some skins look only so-so in pictures but look fantastic in game) so that may raise it to 5.5 once I try it out.

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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by jplm on Wed Dec 07, 2011 9:21 pm

thanks for the comment,it took about 5 hours to make,so seeing that people here like it means a lot to me
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by Natezilla10000 on Thu Dec 08, 2011 1:59 am

*BEEP*BEEP*BEEP*BEEP*BEEEEEEEEE-BOOOM!*

Well GREAT! It broke the epic scale!

That's the one of the best Raptors I've ever seen. Great Work! Wink
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by jplm on Thu Dec 08, 2011 2:01 am

wow thanks,I'm also happy with the v2
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by aristo on Fri Dec 09, 2011 11:44 am

Look improving!
i voted 3.5/5 for v1 and 4/5 for v2
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by jplm on Fri Dec 09, 2011 3:48 pm

thanks for all comments and votes.I'm also hapy with this one,I think the v2 improved a lot,especialy on th joints
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by velociraptor24 on Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:51 am

It's the best I've seen in over 9000 years, and btw you can directly post pictures.
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Re: realistic velociraptor by jplm v1 and v2

Post by jplm on Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:56 am

thanks for comments,about the pics,I discovered what was wrong with the way I was doing it today(my comp almost broke down)
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