Evil Rex 2:Hell on earth(Omar's story)

New york city,once a peaceful CIty,is now being ravaged and Terrorized by a Demonic Tyrannosaurus
The beast has destroyed most of the city,But somewhere,Inside an abandoned mall,a man sits and waits for the horror to end
His name is omar.He is now alone and Afraid,Usually a tough Strong man,He has been reduced to a Lonely,scared human being.Outside he hears screams of terror,A small tear falls from his eyes,Suddenly he hears a noise
in the cafeteria."who's there?","WHO'S THERE!"
Omar went into the cafeteria ,there he saw a young woman named Alice.Like omar,she is also trying to hide from the demons."Who are you?"omar asked
"My names alice,are you hiding from them to?"
"No,i'm just here to check out the latest shoe designs"Omar said
Alice was a shy,Kind and somewhat smart girl
"What the hell's going on?"Alice said in a frightened voice
"I think you just answered your own question"omar said
"So,what's your name?"Alice asked
"The names omar"
"Why are you here ?"omar asked
"My brother was killed by one of the demons,i managed to escape,however"
Alice then started to cry a little bit."I miss him so much"
"I'm sorry to hear that"Omar said
"did you.....DId you lose anybody"
"all of them"Omar said
The two walked around the mall,hoping to find other survivors
"We've been searching for hours,for all we know we might the only humans left on earth"Omar said
"Don't say that"Alice said,Omar then grabbed alice by the arms
"OPEN YOUR EYES,WE'RE TRAPPED IN HERE WHILE INNOCENT PEOPLE ARE DYING OUTSIDE!!"
"Jesus,calm down"Alice said."You're right,i just...I just"Omar sighed"I just can't believe this is happening
everybody we have loved and known is dead"
Then alice said with a smile on her face "Not everybody"
"No,No,Now's not the time for that"Omar said
"I'm sorry,i just thought"
Suddenly,Omar heard loud footsteps heading towards them
It was the demon lord himself.
"Wait.Do you hear that,Follow me" Omar said
they hid behind a wall hoping that the t-rex didn't see them
"ssssh.Don't make a sound"
The suddenly,the t-rex walked away
But then a pack of demonic raptors walked into the Mall.
Omar and alice Quickly looked at the raptors,They had head-light like eyes that searched for any signs of life
These hell raptors were different from the Larger,stronger and dumber hell allosaurs
the raptors were smarter and faster,Able to see even in the darkest places
Omar and alice kept avoiding the raptors as long as they could
The raptors walked out of the mall,Omar sighed with relief
Then suddenly,A raptor Appeared out of nowhere and spotted the two.Alice screamed in fear
Omar quickly grabbed his shotgun and blasted the raptors,Killing The pack
Omar Quickly turned around to look for alice,She had ran out of the mall.Omar went after her.
outside,he saw nothing but horror,The trees were dead,bodies were laying everywhere
"Alice?","alice where are you?","alice?" "ALICE!"Omar Tried Calling for alice,but he heard nothing
Omar couldn't believe it,He had lead alice to the same fate as his cousin
Omar started to cry,"Why?,Why do you torment me so,Haven't i suffered enough"
He then lost it"Answer me,Answer me!,ANSWER ME!!!",omar was silenced when he hear a loud thundering roar Behind him
"Oh god no",It was the massive Beast,Omar was staring right into the eyes of the devil,but then,he noticed that behind the t-rex was alice,She tried to save omar by throwing a rock at it,she tried to distract it,Giving omar the chance to escape,But the t-rex walked over to her,and grabbed her by the leg,and took her away
But omar followed it,He then saw an army vehicle,in it,he found a rocket launcher,he fired at the monster.
It didn't kill it,but the t-rex did release alice,but it turned it's attention back at omar,Fueled by rage the t-rex Ran after omar,It grabbed him by the arm,and lifted him up like he was a ragdoll,But then omar grabbed his Shotgun and shot the t-rex in the eye,The t-rex roared in pain Dropping omar as well,Injured but still breathing,omar layed there until the t-rex decided to walk away
Omar,bloodied and weakened,walked over to alice
"Alice,alice wake up,ALICE!"
Aliced coughed and said "Omar,are we still alive"
Omar then asked "Why did you try to save me"
And alice replied "why did you save me"
Omar helped alice up
"come on,let's get out of here"Omar said
Both took a Abandoned taxi and drove off
Later,while driving,omar saw that the demons were flying away,Retreating back into the dark pit from where they came,Omar saw Survivors walking out of the horror,A smile grew on his face,knowing that the human race can survive anything,even the apocalypse

this belongs in the library, also good job, though a little short, i could have been better if you had made it longer and added a bit more suspense

Well,For one,this is Part of my "Hell rex 2" story that i never put in
It's kind of like a "Deleted page" If you will

well ok, if this is just a small part then i really want to see the whole thing

Here's the original story:
http://ogparadise.attivoforum.com/fanmade-f22/evil-rex-2hell-on-earth-t505.htm

very nice dude

Thunderaptor2 wrote:very nice dude

Thanks Dude(Sometimes i wonder if i should make these stories into a novel)

dude that was awesome, makes me wonder how that hell born T-rex looks like, if its half as cool as what i think it looks like then it would make one KILLER skin

OmarTK95, You could so turn this into a novel

Maxtyrannus wrote:dude that was awesome, makes me wonder how that hell born T-rex looks like, if its half as cool as what i think it looks like then it would make one KILLER skin

Okay,here's an accurate decription
He's Dark Red,he has red pupilless eyes,magma flows through his veins,Giving him a lava like pattern on his skin
(something like this)

He also has a 666 mark on his tail

ohh, that sounds creepy

Thunderaptor2 wrote:ohh, that sounds creepy

well,thank you,and if you think THAT's creepy,you do not want to know what the hell raptors look like

They look like the thing on you sig right

Thunderaptor2 wrote:They look like the thing on you sig right

Sort of,They have Bright red eyes,They have rotting skin,One of them has his throat ripped open
They have long blade like claws,And They bark like dogs from Hades,Their spines are exposed like the mutant raptors from turok,and,unlike normal raptors,have serpent like tongues,The sight of them can cause sever hart attacks

ohh, crapp, that's freaky